Putting in my two cents!
You've captured so much fun with these words. My favorite phrase? "Zing zong zappaty!"
So Jabberwocky-ish, and fun to read. This begs to be read aloud, not in the mind.
Yes, like Elsie-must read aloud, Katie. I like that "shim sham abingno"! Have you memorized it yet?
Definitely a read aloud. Playful.